editors: Thread: Review Required: Linux-Mobile-Guide (former Laptop-HOWTO)

Hi all,

An author has recently replaced the Laptop HOWTO with a Linux-Mobile
Guide, and has requested a review due to the amount of new material and
since the author is ESL.  We're looking for spelling, grammar, clarity,
markup, as well as the usual copyright & license and metadata.

Please let me (and the list) know if you'd like to work on this and I'll
forward you the source file!

Thanks,
Tab


-----Forwarded Message-----
From: Werner Heuser ####@####.####
To: Tabatha Marshall ####@####.####
Subject: Re: new issue of Linux-Mobile-Guide (former Laptop-HOWTO)
Date: Thu, 20 Nov 2003 12:14:18 +0100

Hi Tabatha,

> How extensive were your changes?  Shall we arrange for a language and
> technical review?  If it's a new issue and there's a lot of new material
> we probably should.

they were extensive changes and additions, also I am not a native
speaker of English, so your reviews are much welcome.

> Also, I assume you'd like us to remove the Laptop HOWTO when this is
> added?

This seems to be a good idea.

	Thank you

	Werner

PS: a new source is attached which corrects a wrong URL, I
did not increase the release number
-- 
Tabatha Marshall
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Linux Documentation Project Review Coordinator (http://www.tldp.org)
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