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Hi All,

Saqib has updated his Apache WebDAV-LDAP HOWTO, and has requested that
someone review his changes for spelling/grammar.  He's indicated that
technical review has been done.

Anybody up for this one?  I'll have to forward you the files, as the
list doesn't like it when I send attachments.

Thanks!
Tab



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Hi Tabatha,

Attached is the source for the HOWTO

(See attached file: Apache-WebDAV-LDAP-HOWTO.xml)

Thanks.
In Peace,
Saqib Ali


                                                                                                                                                    
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Okay.  I'd like to give some of the other reviewers a chance, so please
attach the file in an email (with a diff against the original if
possible) and I will check with the reviewers.  If no one is available,
I'll take care of it myself!

Tab


On Mon, 2003-07-21 at 15:30, ####@####.#### wrote:
> Hi Tabatha,
>
> Thanks for the reply. The document has already gone through technical
> review (twice). I just need a language/formatting/presentation review.
>
> Thanks.
> In Peace,
> Saqib Ali
>
>
>

>                       Tabatha Marshall

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> On Mon, 2003-07-21 at 06:43, ####@####.#### wrote:
> > I m the maintainer for the "Apache based WebDAV Server with LDAP and
SSL"
> > HOWTO.
> >
> > I recently made some updates to a subsection of this HOWTO, and I would
> > like to get it reviewed by reviewers @ linux-doc
>
> What type of review do you need?  If both technical and language, I can
> help with the language, but we'd have to call for a volunteer to help
> with a technical review.  I see Thomas Zimmerman has provided some
> feedback - thanks!
>
> > The updated section is available @
> >
>
http://www.xml-dev.com:8080/cocoon/mount/docbook/Apache-WebDAV-LDAP-HOWTO.html#ssl

>
> >
> > Please let me know if any one can review this section.
>
> >From what I saw via your link, it probably needs only a light
> grammar/spelling review.  I'd recommend finding someone to go over the
> technical aspects first, and then I could help with the rest.
>
>
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Tabatha Marshall
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Linux Documentation Project Review Coordinator (http://www.tldp.org)
Linux Counter Area Manager US:wa (http://counter.li.org)