editors: HOWTO-Creating SSI Clusters Using UML


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Subject: Re: HOWTO-Creating SSI Clusters Using UML
From: Randy Kramer ####@####.####
Date: 17 May 2002 17:43:25 -0000
Message-Id: <3CE53F64.264D@fast.net>

Has anyone volunteered so far?

If not, I am willing to make a pass at it, on my own terms.  What I mean
by that is, I am willing to read it in a format that allows me to make
changes in whatever editor or reader I use, and then send the revised
file to you, the author, or whoever, who can then run a diff on it
versus the original file to see what I changed.  (Of course, there may
be things that I can't or choose not to fix, and will merely embed notes
in the document -- perhaps "this paragraph is not clear", or "does that
refer to <this> or <that>.)

I have used this approach before with a few receptive website authors
using Amanda.

I have not read the LDP's reviewer's HOWTO or whatever it is, probably
will not do that before the review.

I have no knowledge of SSI, this review would be primarily on language,
clarity, understandability, etc.

Let me know if you'd like me to make a pass at it.

Randy Kramer

http://ssic-linux.sourceforge.net/ssiuml-howto/intro.html (so I have the
link at hand)

Joy Y Goodreau wrote:
> If anyone can take up a review of the document listed below, I would really
> appreciate it. We are trying to get all documents reviewed in 5-7 days for
> new submissions.
> 
> The review is for grammar, sentence structure, organization, and
> appropriateness. The document would need to be reviewed by 5/22 at the
> latest.
> 
> I'll help out with any questions you have, and help you get started.
>

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