discuss: Re: 802.1X reviewers still wanted!
Subject:
Re: 802.1X reviewers still wanted!
From:
Lars Strand ####@####.####
Date:
12 Oct 2004 15:49:30 -0000
Message-Id: <20041012154924.GB73837@trinity.gnist.org>
I'am CC'ing this to the submit and discuss list as well.
On Tue, 12 Oct 2004, Ira Krakow wrote:
>
> I am a native United States English speaker. I have
> technical writing and book authoring experience. In
> addition I do database consulting on the Windows
> platform. I am migrating to Linux (I have Fedora Core
> 2 and Windows XP dual booted). I live in the Boston,
> Massachusetts area.
>
That is great! (Since I'm no native english speaking -
as you sure have figured out by now ;)
> I would like to do a US English review of your 802.1X
> howto. The topic is very interesting to me. At first
> glance, the document appears to be well organized,
> although I see some minor spelling and grammar errors.
>
If you like - you can do a technical review as well (double check all
technical terms and references). Since I've already have had both the
developers of Xsupplicant and freeRADIUS to read it over - this should
not be necessary.
> I could edit the XML file with vi or emacs, do a diff
> -u with the original file, and email the diff output.
> Would that be what you're looking for as far as output
> is concerned? Is there a better way of editing?
>
You don't need to do a diff - you can just send me the
corrected XML file and I'll diff it myself if you have never
done it before.
> Please bear with me, since this is my first time doing
> a review of this sort on Linux.
>
> PS. I also see that you would like an encrypted
> reply. I would like to learn the best method for
> doing encrypted email and would like your opinion.
>
No need to encrypt the reply - the document is public anyway.
> Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from
> you soon.
>
Just send me a mail as soon as you are finished! And I'll re-submit it
to the tldp.org!
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Lars Strand
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